[IMP] website_blog: spellcheck/grammar for module description, courtesy of Ray Carnes...
authorOlivier Dony <odo@openerp.com>
Tue, 29 Apr 2014 08:23:29 +0000 (10:23 +0200)
committerOlivier Dony <odo@openerp.com>
Tue, 29 Apr 2014 08:23:29 +0000 (10:23 +0200)
bzr revid: odo@openerp.com-20140429082329-m3q74wr7fgyr3bbu

addons/website_blog/static/description/index.html

index 171fe94..6a1f940 100644 (file)
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 <section class="oe_container">
     <div class="oe_row">
         <h2 class="oe_slogan">Automated Translation by Professionals</h2>
-        <h3 class="oe_slogan">Reach multi-languages audiences without Pain</h3>
+        <h3 class="oe_slogan">Reach multi-language audiences without pain</h3>
         <div class="oe_span6">
             <div class="oe_bg_img">
                 <img class="oe_picture" src="openerp_translation_tool.png">
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
         <h3 class="oe_slogan">Live chat with your visitors in one click</h3>
         <div class="oe_span6">
           <p class='oe_mt32'>
-              The integrated live chat features allows you to start chatting in
+              The integrated live chat feature allows you to start chatting in
               real time with your visitors to get feedback on your recent posts
               or get ideas to write new posts.
           </p><p>
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 
 <section class="oe_container">
     <div class="oe_row">
-        <h2 class="oe_slogan">Build Visitors Loyalty</h2>
+        <h2 class="oe_slogan">Build Visitor Loyalty</h2>
         <h3 class="oe_slogan">Social Media Integration and Easy Following</h3>
         <div class="oe_span6">
             <img class="oe_picture oe_screenshot" src="social.png">
            <p class='oe_mt32'>
                 The one click <em>follow</em> button will allow visitors
                 to receive your blog posts by email with no effort, without
-                having to register. Social media icons allows visitors to share
+                having to register. Social media icons allow visitors to share
                 your best blog posts easily.
            </p>
         </div>
         <div class="oe_span6">
           <p class='oe_mt32'>
             Get a clear visibility of your sales funnel. OpenERP's Google
-            Analytics trackers are configured by default to track all kind of
+            Analytics trackers are configured by default to track all kinds of
             events related to shopping carts, call-to-actions, etc.
           </p><p>
             As OpenERP marketing tools (mass mailing, campaigns, etc) are also
         <div class="oe_span6">
           <p class='oe_mt32'>
               SEO tools are ready to use, with no configuration required.
-              OpenERP suggests keywords for your titles according to Google
-              most searched terms, Google Analytics tracks interrests of your
-              visitors, sitemap are created automatically for Google
-              indexation, etc.
+              OpenERP suggests keywords for your titles according to Google's
+              most searched terms, Google Analytics tracks interests of your
+              visitors, sitemaps are created automatically for quick Google
+              indexing, etc.
           </p><p>
-              We even do structured content automatically to promote your
-              product and events efficiently in Google.
+              The system even creates structured content automatically to promote your
+              products and events effectively in Google.
           </p>
         </div>
     </div>
               Themes are awesome and easy to design. You don't need to develop
               to create new pages, themes or building blocks. We use a clean
               HTML structure, a <a href="http://getbootstrap.com/">bootstrap</a>
-              CSS and our modularity allows to distribute your themes easily.
+              CSS and our modularity allows you to distribute your themes easily.
           </p><p>
               The building block approach allows the website to remain clean
-              after the end-users start creating new contents.
+              after end-users start creating new contents.
           </p>
         </div>
         <div class="oe_span6">
 <section class="oe_container">
     <div class="oe_row">
         <h2 class="oe_slogan">Easy Access Rights</h2>
-        <h3 class="oe_slogan">Adapt your publishing process to your own need</h3>
+        <h3 class="oe_slogan">A publishing process that meets your own needs</h3>
         <div class="oe_span6">
             <div class="oe_bg_img">
                 <img class="oe_picture oe_screenshot" src="blog_create.png">
         <div class="oe_span6">
           <p class='oe_mt32'>
               Not everyone requires the same access to your website.
-              Designers manage the layout of the site, editors approves content and
+              Designers manage the layout of the site, editors approve content and
               authors write that content. This lets you organize your publishing
               process according to your needs.
           </p><p>
-              Others access rights related to business objects (products, people,
-              events, etc) directly follows OpenERP's standard access right allowing
-              you to not have to configure them twice.
+              Other access rights are related to business objects (products, people,
+              events, etc) and directly following OpenERP's standard access rights
+              management, so you do not have to configure things twice.
           </p>
         </div>
     </div>