From a1f307b4893c1f551f40451902ffc7b6876dfcc0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Olivier Dony Date: Mon, 14 Jul 2014 20:17:24 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] [FIX] snippets: avoid orphan full stop (.) --- addons/website/views/snippets.xml | 4 ++-- addons/website_mail/views/snippets.xml | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/addons/website/views/snippets.xml b/addons/website/views/snippets.xml index 494673c..b283c11 100644 --- a/addons/website/views/snippets.xml +++ b/addons/website/views/snippets.xml @@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ A great way to catch your reader's attention is to tell a story. Everything you consider writing can be told as a story.

- Great stories have personality. Consider telling + Great stories have personality. Consider telling a great story that provides personality. Writing a story with personality for potential clients will asist with making a relationship connection. This shows up in small @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ of view, not from someone else's experience.

Great stories are for everyone even when only written for - just one person. If you try to write with a wide general + just one person. If you try to write with a wide general audience in mind, your story will ring false and be bland. No one will be interested. Write for one person. If it’s genuine for the one, it’s genuine for the rest.

diff --git a/addons/website_mail/views/snippets.xml b/addons/website_mail/views/snippets.xml index ebbcf6d..5e62191 100644 --- a/addons/website_mail/views/snippets.xml +++ b/addons/website_mail/views/snippets.xml @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Everything you consider writing can be told as a story.

- Great stories have personality. Consider telling + Great stories have personality. Consider telling a great story that provides personality. Writing a story with personality for potential clients will asist with making a relationship connection. This shows up in small @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@

Great stories are for everyone even when only written for - just one person. If you try to write with a wide general + just one person. If you try to write with a wide general audience in mind, your story will ring false and be bland. No one will be interested. Write for one person. If it’s genuine for the one, it’s genuine for the rest. -- 1.7.10.4