<h2>
A Great Headline
</h2>
- <h3 class="text-muted">A good subtitle. A very good one.</h3>
+ <h3 class="text-muted">A good subtitle</h3>
</div>
<div class="col-md-12 mb16 mt16">
<p>
- A great way to catch reader's attention is to tell a story.
+ A great way to catch your reader's attention is to tell a story.
Everything you consider writing can be told as a story.
</p><p>
- <b>Great stories have personality</b>. Personality
- connected to your person. This shows up in small
- quirks like word choices or phrases. Write as you
- write, not as someone else would write.
+ <b>Great stories have personality</b>. Consider telling
+ a great story that provides personality. Writing a story
+ with personality for potential clients will asist with
+ making a relationship connection. This shows up in small
+ quirks like word choices or phrases. Write from your point
+ of view, not from someone else's experience.
</p><p>
- <b>Great stories are for everyone when written for
- just one</b>. If you try to write with a wide general
- audience in mind, your story will ring false. It
- will be bland. No one will be interested. Write for
- one person. If it’s genuine for the one, it’s
- genuine for the rest.
+ <b>Great stories are for everyone even when only written for
+ just one person</b>. If you try to write with a wide general
+ audience in mind, your story will ring false and be bland.
+ No one will be interested. Write for one person. If it’s genuine for the one, it’s genuine for the rest.
</p>
</div>
</div>
business problems.
</p>
<p>
- Our products are designed for small to medium companies willing to optimize
+ Our products are designed for small to medium size companies willing to optimize
their performance.
</p>
</div>
business problems.
</p>
<p>
- Our products are designed for small to medium companies willing to optimize
+ Our products are designed for small to medium size companies willing to optimize
their performance.
</p>
</div>
<div class="container">
<div class="row">
<div class="col-md-12 mt16 mb8">
- <h1 class="text-center">What do customers say about us...</h1>
+ <h1 class="text-center">What do customers say about us...?</h1>
</div>
<div class="col-md-4 col-md-offset-1 mt16 mb0">
<blockquote data-snippet-id="quote">
<li>available for any touchscreen device (ipod, ipad, any tablet)mobile (with portable devices)</li>
<li>no installation required</li>
<li>no synchronization needed, completely integrated</li>
- <li>continue working even when your connection is down if you close your browser, data won't be lost</li>
+ <li>continue working even when your connection is down or if you close your browser, data won't be lost</li>
<li>fully web based with a clean interface smart interface</li>
</ul>
<p>You have different options to select your products. You can do it through the
barcode reader, just browse through the categories you have put in place (ie.
drinks, snacks, meals, etc.), or text search in case neither of the other
-options work for you. If you need to use the POS for your restaurant, for
-example, your employees can record at the same time multiple tickets without
-having to wait to do one transaction at a time. Along, to facilitate payment,
+options work for you. For example, if you need to use the POS for your restaurant,
+your employees can record multiple tickets at the same time without having to wait
+to process one transaction at a time. In addition, you can facilitate payments,
the application allows multiple payment methods.</p>
<p>The POS application is so simple and accessible to use that your shop or
restaurant will never need any other tool to manage orders. Due to its smart
element: 'a[data-action=new_blog_post]',
placement: 'left',
title: "New Blog Post",
- content: "Select this entry to create a new blog post.",
+ content: "Select this menu item to create a new blog post.",
template: self.popover({ fixed: true }),
trigger: {
modal: {
stepId: 'post-title',
element: 'h1[data-oe-expression="blog_post.name"]',
placement: 'top',
- title: "Pick a Title",
+ title: "Create a Title",
content: "Click on this area and set a catchy title.",
template: self.popover({ next: "OK" }),
},
element: '.oe_active .oe_snippet_remove',
placement: 'top',
title: "Delete the Title",
- content: "From this toolbar you can move, duplicate or delete the selected zone. Click on the cross to delete the title.",
+ content: "From this toolbar you can move, duplicate or delete the selected zone. Click on the garbage can image to delete the title.",
trigger: 'click',
},
{
{
stepId: 'welcome-event',
title: "Create an Event",
- content: "Let's go through the firsts step to publish a new event.",
+ content: "Let's go through the first steps to publish a new event.",
template: self.popover({ next: "Start Tutorial", end: "Skip It" }),
backdrop: true,
},
element: '#content-menu-button',
placement: 'left',
title: "Add Content",
- content: "The <em>Content</em> menu allows to create new pages, events, menus, etc.",
+ content: "The <em>Content</em> menu allows you to create new pages, events, menus, etc.",
template: self.popover({ fixed: true }),
trigger: 'click',
},
stepId: 'choose-name',
element: '.modal input',
placement: 'right',
- title: "Choose an Event Name",
- content: "Choose a name for your new event and click <em>'Continue'</em>. e.g: Technical Training",
+ title: "Create an Event Name",
+ content: "Create a name for your new event and click <em>'Continue'</em>. e.g: Technical Training",
},
{
stepId: 'event-page',
<div t-if="event.twitter_hashtag" class="mt16">
<p><strong>Participate on Twitter</strong></p>
<p class="text-muted">
- Find out what others are seeing and
- saying about this event, and join the
- conversation.
+ Find out what people see and say about this event,
+ and join the conversation.
</p>
<p><strong>Use this tag:
<a t-att-href="'http://twitter.com/search?q=#'+event.twitter_hashtag" class="label label-primary">#<span t-field="event.twitter_hashtag"/></a>
<div t-if="event.twitter_hashtag" class="mt16">
<p><strong>Participate on Twitter</strong></p>
<p class="text-muted">
- Find out what others are seeing and
- saying about this event, and join the
- conversation.
+ Find out what people see and say about this event,
+ and join the conversation.
</p>
<p><strong>Use this tag:
<a t-att-href="'http://twitter.com/search?q=#'+event.twitter_hashtag" class="label label-primary">#<span t-field="event.twitter_hashtag"/></a>
element: '.product_price',
placement: 'left',
title: "Change the public price",
- content: "Edit the sale price of this product by clicking on the amount. The price is the sale price used in all sale order when selling this product.",
+ content: "Edit the sale price of this product by clicking on the amount. The price is the sale price used in all sale orders when selling this product.",
template: self.popover({ next: "OK" }),
},
{
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